Melanies speech review

March 26, 2009 on 7:55 pm | By admin | In Technology | No Comments

Melanie Connecting your main topic to a personal story was an excellent way to hook the audience. You should have mentioned that in the beginning of your speech and not the end. Good job breaking it down into the symptoms and the ways to deal with Aspergers (zune charger). From what you said about your brother and his memorization prowess it really doesn’t seem like a bad thing at all! He should go to med school! You were sufficiently loud and it was structured pretty well. Again, relating the story to your own family made it all the more personal and you didn’t fidget too much. However there were times when you were a little hard to hear and you shouldn’t interrupt yourself so often. Excellent speech overall!